I am writing a paper in which I give the following definition.
Let $n$ be a natural number greater than or equal to $2$. Define a function $f_n:[0,1]\to\mathbb{R}$ by $$ f_n(c)=\sup\{\|P_n...P_2 P_1-P_0\|\,|\,c_F(H;H_1,...,H_n)\leqslant c\}, $$ where the supremum is taken over all complex Hilbert spaces $H$ and systems of closed subspaces $H_1,...,H_n$ of $H$ for which the Friedrichs number $c_F(H;H_1,...,H_n)$ is less than or equal to $c$, $P_i$ denotes the orthogonal projection onto $H_i$ in $H$, $i=1,2,...,n$, and $P_0$ denotes the orthogonal projection onto the subspace $H_0:=H_1\cap H_2\cap...\cap H_n$ in $H$, $c\in[0,1]$.
Is the notation in this definition clear and correct? Or do I have to write something like the following?
For a Hilbert space $M$ and a closed subspace $N$ of $M$ denote by $P^M_N$ the orthogonal projection onto $N$ in $M$. Let $n$ be a natural number greater than or equal to $2$. Define a function $f_n:[0,1]\to\mathbb{R}$ by $$ f_n(c)=\sup\{\|P^H_{H_n}...P^H_{H_2} P^H_{H_1}-P^H_{H_1\cap H_2\cap...\cap H_n}\|\,|\,c_F(H;H_1,...,H_n)\leqslant c\}, $$ where the supremum is taken over all complex Hilbert spaces $H$ and systems of closed subspaces $H_1,...,H_n$ of $H$ for which the Friedrichs number $c_F(H;H_1,...,H_n)$ is less than or equal to $c$, $c\in[0,1]$.
I will be very grateful for any comments and answers.